Harvey's Collection of Stories

So I have a lot of stories that I have started, but never finished. So I thought, why not set up a forum where people give me ideas for the stories they like so that I can get the writing juices flowing? So I will upload a bunch of my stories for you to review! I'll provide a link to my stories in this forum, and then you come back here and review. Put the title of the story in front of your post when reviewing.

My Shape-Shifter and Me: https://jetroleplayemporium.rpg-board.net/writing-f24/my-shape-shifter-and-me-t45.htm

Roaming Heart: https://jetroleplayemporium.rpg-board.net/writing-f24/roaming-heart-t44.htm

A True Fairytale: https://jetroleplayemporium.rpg-board.net/writing-f24/a-true-fairytale-t22.htm

Runaway: https://jetroleplayemporium.rpg-board.net/writing-f24/runaway-t43.htm

The Darkness: https://jetroleplayemporium.rpg-board.net/writing-f24/the-darkness-t42.htm

The New Born: https://jetroleplayemporium.rpg-board.net/writing-f24/the-new-born-t40.htm

25 Ornaments: Now, I don't have this one uploaded because the computer I had this one on is stupid and won't let me get on at 3AM because of parental controls. I promise to have it up soon!